Thread:Enderverse/@comment-32271305-20180302213035/@comment-4199482-20180302223657

Hmm, let me see if I understand his passive. At 100% HP he has +70% ATK, 90% HP he has +63% ATK, 80% HP he has +56% ATK, etc? If so, then yeah your description makes perfect sense to me. And inverted for DEF? I guess you can call those smaller bars "sub-bars" or "subdivisions". I think it would be useful to say note that there are ten, and each marks 10% HP increments.

You could say something like:"At 100% HP, Boujack receives +70% ATK (and +7% DEF). For every 10% HP lost, that boost is reduced -7% ATK (while gaining +7% DEF). Multiplying the number of remaining sub-bars/subdivisions of your HP bar by 7% will tell you his current ATK boost. Multiplying the number of lost sub-bars/subdivisions by 7% will tell you his current DEF boost. These boosts are continuous and not discrete."

Of course you should choose one of the terms, I recommend "subdivision" since it's not hyphenated. But maybe someone else has a better idea. Also, if you think it's too wordy, then just cut the parts about DEF and say like the math is inverted for DEF or something.